Writing

A story that proves the saying

Write a short story in which a character learns that there is no success without effort.

Níl bua gan duaThere is no success without effort.Meaning, pronunciation and source →

What to do

  1. Read the saying and its meaning: there is no success without effort.
  2. Think of a character who wants something. It could be a person, an animal or a robot.
  3. Plan three parts: what they want, the effort it takes, and what happens at the end.
  4. Write the story on the lines. Use the sentence starters if they help.
  5. Read it back. Would a reader know which saying it proves without being told?

Questions to talk about

  • Did your character succeed? Was the effort worth it?
  • Can a story prove a saying wrong? How?

You will need

  • The printed writing page
  • A pencil

Make it fit

Simpler: Write three sentences only: the wish, the work and the ending. Draw a picture beside them.

More of a stretch: Do not name the saying anywhere in the story. Swap with a partner and see if they can guess which one it proves.

Printables

The instructions card is for the adult running the activity; the worksheet is for the children. Prints on A4 or US Letter at 100% / actual size; colour is optional.

The writing page

A story that proves the saying

Níl bua gan duaThere is no success without effort.

Name

Write a short story that proves the saying true.

  • More than anything, ... wanted to ...
  • The first try did not go well because ...
  • Every day after that, ...
  • In the end, ...
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The instructions card

How to run it · Writing

A story that proves the saying

Write a short story in which a character learns that there is no success without effort.

30 minutesOn your own, In pairsAges 9–12, Ages 12+

A tired, proud child planting a flag on a hilltop

Níl bua gan duaThere is no success without effort.

What to do

  1. Read the saying and its meaning: there is no success without effort.
  2. Think of a character who wants something. It could be a person, an animal or a robot.
  3. Plan three parts: what they want, the effort it takes, and what happens at the end.
  4. Write the story on the lines. Use the sentence starters if they help.
  5. Read it back. Would a reader know which saying it proves without being told?

You will need

  • The printed writing page
  • A pencil

Talk about

  • Did your character succeed? Was the effort worth it?
  • Can a story prove a saying wrong? How?

Make it fit

Simpler: Write three sentences only: the wish, the work and the ending. Draw a picture beside them.

Stretch: Do not name the saying anywhere in the story. Swap with a partner and see if they can guess which one it proves.

Goes with the printable writing page.

seanfhocail.ie · Free for classroom and home use · Meanings, audio and sources for every saying: seanfhocail.ie/classroom/activities/story-that-proves-the-saying